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| Posted on: Mar 18 2009, 06:01 AM | |
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Should say "it's" rather than "its" in the last sentence. Also, might combine the last two sentences into "At only 49.95, it is a great value for your money." QUOTE(Henrik Poulsen @ Feb 12 2009, 03:58 PM) [snapback]2038[/snapback] Hey guys. I just thought I would help you out a little so you wont have to cut n paste. http://www.allround-invoice.com |
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