| Posted on: Feb 20 2009, 04:13 PM | |
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Hello Angel. Your copy is showing a lot of improvement. What I would suggest now is to set up a split run testing mechanism (A/B) and start testing the effectiveness of the copy. There are many variables to test, you can start out with a couple of different headlines and then test offers, pricing, subheads, fonts, headers, etc. Testing is by far the best way to figure out what works best for your target market. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting critiques · Post Preview: #2057 · Replies: 1 · Views: 2,903 |
| Posted on: Feb 20 2009, 04:08 PM | |
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Hello Claire. In my opinion, corporate sounding copy should be avoided at all costs. It is boring and impersonal. Remember that people like to buy and do business with other people... not with a faceless corporation. For that reason alone, you should try to write in a way that talks directly to the target market, connects with them on a personal level and gains their trust. Nobody said that writing copy is easy. It's not. At least not when starting out... And that's why as copywriters we should never consider a piece "done". When possible, you should try to make constant improvements to the copy with the goal of increasing response (done by testing). I hope this helps... but I'd also like to hear what other members of the forum have to say about it. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #2056 · Replies: 6 · Views: 3,452 |
| Posted on: Feb 20 2009, 04:02 PM | |
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Hello Dave. The length of the sales letter should not be based on personal preference. There's a saying in the copywriting world that goes like this: "The length of your copy is like a woman's dress; it should be long enough to cover the essentials, but short enough to keep things interesting." Said that, you also need to consider the audience and write your copy accordingly. I'd love to read what the other members of this forum have to say about this never ending debate over the length of sales letters. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #2055 · Replies: 2 · Views: 2,307 |
| Posted on: Feb 20 2009, 03:53 PM | |
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Hello Claire. Welcome to the Copywriter's forum. Feel free to join any of the existing conversations or to start new ones with a question or a thought. Would you mind telling us a bit more about yourself? Are you new to copywriting or do you have some experience on this field? Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #2054 · Replies: 2 · Views: 2,162 |
| Posted on: Feb 14 2009, 11:31 PM | |
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Hi guys. Lately, the forum has been gaining more attention and new users are signing up to join the discussions. Unfortunately, spammers have also been attracted and they're trying to pollute us with their garbage. If you'd like to help, send me a private message to apply as a designated forum moderator. I'll modify your access so you can delete spam whenever you see it. Let me know if you're interested. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: News & Announcements · Post Preview: #2041 · Replies: 1 · Views: 4,665 |
| Posted on: Feb 2 2009, 06:25 PM | |
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Hi. Twitter is HUGE... and in my opinion it's the best thing to happen on the internet after e-mail. For me, It is a great way to stay in touch and build solid relationships with new and interesting people. And a very nice way to market stuff online (although you've got to be very careful to not spam other users). I even made a video about twitter marketing... here it is: http://www.marketingfactor.com/socialmarke...-marketing-101/ And if you want to follow me on twitter, here's my microblog: http://www.twitter.com/copywriting/ Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Off-topic · Post Preview: #2020 · Replies: 6 · Views: 4,385 |
| Posted on: Jan 31 2009, 05:00 AM | |
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Hi. Just a quick note to let you know I'm here to answer any questions you may have about the course (or about anything related to writing sales copy). Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com P.S.- Whenever you find a spammer polluting the forum, please report it by sending me a private message. I'll clean it up immediately. |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #2017 · Replies: 6 · Views: 4,995 |
| Posted on: Jan 17 2009, 07:44 PM | |
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Hi. I've tried it and liked it so much that I'm actually offering it on this site. http://www.copywriting.com/copywriting-genius.html However... I would only recommend it for those copywriters who already have some experience. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1972 · Replies: 3 · Views: 3,449 |
| Posted on: Dec 24 2008, 05:46 PM | |
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Hi Thomas. I find myself visiting these two quite a bit when writing copy: 1) Rhymezone 2) The visual thesaurus Hope those help you. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez CEO, Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1917 · Replies: 2 · Views: 3,635 |
| Posted on: Dec 12 2008, 04:23 PM | |
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Hi Tommy. What kind of sales pages are you looking for? Have you requested a quote directly from us? Cheers! Miguel Alvarez CEO, Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1878 · Replies: 2 · Views: 3,450 |
| Posted on: Nov 18 2008, 04:25 PM | |
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Hi Richard. The easiest way to test your sales letter is to drive some targeted paid traffic to it. And the easiest way to do it is through Google AdWords (PPC). Having such highly targeted traffic helps you know your conversion rate and test various elements of your letter. I'm not talking about building a full-fledged PPC campaign here. I'm just talking about sending it enough traffic to test how well it sells. Once you know the sales letter is working, you can start using any other promotional methods you want (which normally take a lot more time and effort than PPC). Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1820 · Replies: 3 · Views: 3,821 |
| Posted on: Oct 23 2008, 04:24 AM | |
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Hi. The directory looks good, but I'd probably move the categories to the top to make it more intuitive for the user (or maybe just shorten the amount of stuff to read before reaching the actual article categories). Just my $0.02 Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Off-topic · Post Preview: #1784 · Replies: 3 · Views: 3,942 |
| Posted on: Aug 13 2008, 10:32 PM | |
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Hi Sarah. No, the blog will not affect your adsense account at all. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: News & Announcements · Post Preview: #1721 · Replies: 22 · Views: 15,967 |
| Posted on: May 19 2008, 02:24 PM | |
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Hi. The link you provided is broken. Please update it. Cheers! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting critiques · Post Preview: #1663 · Replies: 2 · Views: 4,654 |
| Posted on: Feb 1 2008, 05:56 PM | |
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Hi Verb. Send me a private message with the new title you want for your blog and I'll try to change it as an admin. Also, please send me the details of those blank blogs that are getting so much traffic and I'll try to figure out why that's happening. All the best! Miguel Alvarez CEO, Copywriting.com |
| Forum: News & Announcements · Post Preview: #1541 · Replies: 22 · Views: 15,967 |
| Posted on: Jan 15 2008, 06:19 PM | |
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Hi. In my opinion, the term "linkbait" is just a buzz-word. The goal is to create a piece that provides high enough value to the target audience that other webmasters feel compelled to link to it and spread the word. Sure, there are a few techniques out there to increase the likelyhood of the link-frenzy to happen... but in the end it all boils down to value to the end reader. Just my two cents... what do you guys think? All the best! Miguel Alvarez |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #1455 · Replies: 4 · Views: 3,779 |
| Posted on: Nov 30 2007, 02:40 AM | |
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Hi. The best advice I can give you is to simply forget about that client and move on with your writing. There's simply no use to doing that and it kind of borders on slandering. It's just not worth your time... I know that a few clients are just *begging* to be talked about in forums like that... but if focus your time and energy in finding new and better clients, you'll be much happier in the long run. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1158 · Replies: 3 · Views: 2,039 |
| Posted on: Nov 21 2007, 03:47 PM | |
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Hi. There are so many to list that I'd spend an hour thinking about them and typing them here... However, if I were to pick just one out of the whole bunch, I'd have to say Robert Collier. His work has inspired me and I study his letters frequently (any time I have a copywriting job in the works). All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1027 · Replies: 7 · Views: 3,929 |
| Posted on: Nov 20 2007, 05:18 PM | |
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Hi. I agree... the best way to go with blogs is to publish real content that is geared for human readers. And to publish it frequently. Of course, you may still do some SEO for the blog and optimize each post's title tag, meta tags, etc... but the blogosphere is not forgiving when it comes to spammy-looking blogs, so look out for that and give your audience what they really want: fresh and relevant information on the subjects you're talking about. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #1012 · Replies: 3 · Views: 2,939 |
| Posted on: Nov 20 2007, 05:15 PM | |
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Hi. Great resource... thanks for sharing it! Larry Dotson (the author of that report) is a great guy and pretty famous in the "internet marketing arena". It had been a while since I last heard of him, but it's good to know he's still publishing stuff like that. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #1011 · Replies: 2 · Views: 2,348 |
| Posted on: Nov 19 2007, 08:16 PM | |
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Hi. Actually, I have a page devoted to answer this question right here on the Copywriting.com website. Here's the link: http://www.copywriting.com/rssfeeds.html Now that you know what they are, let's move on to learn how to create them. Creating an RSS feed for your website can be done using two different approaches: 1) You can publish an RSS feed "manually" by using one of the many RSS publisher software programs out there (the one I recommend is called Feed4All, just Google for it). or 2) You can install a blogging software in your hosting account and then the RSS feed will be automatically created and updated for you when you post on the blog. I'm not sure if this is the type of answer you were looking for or if I should be gettin' more techie with it. Just let me know... All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #1007 · Replies: 235 · Views: 9,691 |
| Posted on: Nov 14 2007, 07:36 PM | |
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Hi. I belive that getting hired to ghost-write a pack of PLR articles is a great way to get some experience working as a freelancer (especially for those just getting started in SEO copywriting). The only downside to this is that the payout is quite frankly pityful. Mostly due to the extremely cheap outsourcing to India and other countries where a few dollars go a long way. My suggestion is that you consider that type of a job as a way of learning the ropes of the freelancer business... but don't really expect to become a millionare for it (there are much higher paying jobs you can get as a copywriter - for example writing salesletters and direct response e-mail promotions). All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: Copywriting · Post Preview: #799 · Replies: 4 · Views: 2,575 |
| Posted on: Nov 14 2007, 07:31 PM | |
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Hello. In the SEO world, these are called on-page factors and off-page factors, and if you want to give your website or blog a good shot at getting good positions in the search engines, I'd recommend focusing 20% of your time in the on-page factors and 80% in the off-page ones (link building). The reason is this... while virtually anyone can write a decently coded HTML page or launch a WordPress blog with a SEO-friendly theme, few people will actually take the time to build relevant links to their sites. Doing so can really give you an edge over your competitors. Some SEO experts are saying that Google ranks your site giving 90% of the weight to off-page factors. I think that may be a bit over the top, but they are saying it for a reason. Many of us have seen what off-page factors can do to a page or site. For example... if you google the phrases "click here" the #1 listing belongs to Adobe's Acrobat Reader. But why? That page doesn't have the words "Click here" anywhere! The reason is that thousands upon thousands of incoming links to that page have those words as the anchor text (the blue underlined text). "Click here to download it now" or "Click here to get acrobat reader". That alone is pretty solid proof of what off-page factors can do for you, so my advice is to focus on them as much as humanly possible without spamming the engines. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #798 · Replies: 5 · Views: 2,703 |
| Posted on: Nov 14 2007, 07:21 PM | |
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Hi. The quick and easy way to get into SEO copywriting is to learn the 11 ways to weave keywords and key-phrases into your copy to please both human readers and the search engine bots. Those 11 ways are described in full in this book by Karon Thackson. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #797 · Replies: 10 · Views: 4,077 |
| Posted on: Nov 4 2007, 04:22 PM | |
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Hi. White words used to be an effective technique in the early 90's. Today, it is considered black hat and you are putting your site at risk of getting banned from Google and other major search engines if you use it. My suggestion is that you don't even try it... Staying under the white hat keeps your site safe and at odds of winning the search engine game in the long run. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
| Forum: SEO Copywriting and SEO tips. · Post Preview: #623 · Replies: 9 · Views: 4,352 |
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