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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 1 Joined: 4-April 08 Member No.: 1,753  |
I am new here and new to copywriting. I did not create this page but been working on tweaking it a little. Can I get some advice on this page? http://www.fitnessandkids.com/new-sales-page.html
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Apr 29 2008, 06:50 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 2 Joined: 29-April 08 Member No.: 2,201 |
I can't see the page. Anyway as this is a sales page the copy writing of tone of it should be persuasive and that your readers or customers will understand what you are trying to say at the first glance of your page.
-------------------- I've devoted a lot of my time and effort during the past few years to developing my advertising copywriting business to the point of where I can support my family and don't have to depend on writing fiction for my income. - George Stephen
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