I'm doing a direct mail campaign with postcards and wondered if anyone would comment on this before I sent it out. I haven't done the back of the card yet it will be just text but will reiterate my call to action which is to just get them to call and listen to a message, at which point they will have the option of pressing "1" to buy my product. Any input would be appreciated.

Nice headline, I would just change it slightly. If those were results of yours or a client, I would say something along the lines of this:

"Learn how my stock trading system turned Joe's $225 investment into $8,625/mo passively ($2,875 * 3) within (day/months it took)"

I donno if that is how it works but is just an example of what I mean. Put a face to it and make it real to the reader. And great job in saying how much, but tell them how fast it could happen.

Besides that it looks great to me. Great Job Mark! I especially love you included the 3 reasons you system works.

You're gonna make a killing Mark.

LB
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