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post Jul 29 2009, 06:56 PM
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My first post. Exciting!
Nice to meet everyone! Seems like a very welcoming community.
I hope I'll be able to help others too!

My website is ready for your critical eyes. Bon Apetit.

www.PDDRO.com

I appreciate the comments,
Pedro Alejandro


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QUOTE (Pedro @ Jul 29 2009, 01:56 PM) *
My first post. Exciting!
Nice to meet everyone! Seems like a very welcoming community.
I hope I'll be able to help others too!

My website is ready for your critical eyes. Bon Apetit.

www.PDDRO.com

I appreciate the comments,
Pedro Alejandro


Hello Pedro.

You've done a wonderful job. Very attractive and creative. I like your choice of colors.
For my taste, I'd add more colors in inconspicuous places. Red and black although sophisticated can also get ummm, boring, page after page. Perhaps add one additional color per page where you want to hi-light your message.

Looking at the source code I see your keywords/phrases as:
"tree,pedro alejandro,advertising concepts,pddro,headlines,freelance,copywriting freelancer,Copywriting,webdesignwixuser,brainstorm"
And your description as: "PDDRO - Creative Freelance Service. Advertising Concepts and Headlinewriting."

FYI - Each page should have it's own set of keywords/phrases and those words should be part of the page title, page url (when you can manage it), headline and page content. If you have a unique set of words for the main pages you may get more traffic and page views based on that information.

I think it is fabulous and give it ummmm, a 7 out of 10 overall. Above average, but needs some of the details reworked in tags.

You're obviously very talented. Good luck!

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