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  Aug 14 2010, 01:06 AM
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Hi everyone,
This is my first posting! Great to see a Copywriting forum out there! I'm starting up a new business. It's a Collective buying site similar to GroupOn, but will be attracting different vendors and users. If you're not familiar with GroupOn, I guess the best suggestion would be to visit GroupOn.com. In a nutshell, the site features one deal per day of a local establishment (Restaurant, Spa, Golf club, etc) at a discounted rate. Eg. "$60 worth of food at restaurant XYZ for only $20!" My company is called SweetSave.com and I've been racking my head all day today trying to come up with a Tag line for my company which will allow me to move on to the next step of creating a logo for the name. Anyhow, some taglines that I thought of which I don't think are the strongest were: 1. Local Daily Deals 2. Now that was Sweet! 3. For the sweetest deals! 4. For the sweetest local deals! 5. Sweeter than Sweet! I'm not really feeling the above taglines and don't really feel like any of them create that IMPACT that I'm looking for. Any suggestions or help would be greatly appreciated! Thanks guys, Dov Just to cover myself as best as I can: Note: To avoid any legal issues, any person replying back with any suggestions acknowledges that the use of the suggested and / or posted tagline will be freely useable by SweetSave.com. |
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Aug 20 2010, 10:24 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 2 Joined: 27-July 10 Member No.: 8,819 |
QUOTE (Dovaleh @ Aug 14 2010, 02:06 AM)  Hi everyone, This is my first posting! Great to see a Copywriting forum out there! I'm starting up a new business. It's a Collective buying site similar to GroupOn, but will be attracting different vendors and users. If you're not familiar with GroupOn, I guess the best suggestion would be to visit GroupOn.com. In a nutshell, the site features one deal per day of a local establishment (Restaurant, Spa, Golf club, etc) at a discounted rate. Eg. "$60 worth of food at restaurant XYZ for only $20!" My company is called SweetSave.com and I've been racking my head all day today trying to come up with a Tag line for my company which will allow me to move on to the next step of creating a logo for the name. Anyhow, some taglines that I thought of which I don't think are the strongest were: 1. Local Daily Deals 2. Now that was Sweet! 3. For the sweetest deals! 4. For the sweetest local deals! 5. Sweeter than Sweet! I'm not really feeling the above taglines and don't really feel like any of them create that IMPACT that I'm looking for. Any suggestions or help would be greatly appreciated! Thanks guys, Dov Just to cover myself as best as I can: Note: To avoid any legal issues, any person replying back with any suggestions acknowledges that the use of the suggested and / or posted tagline will be freely useable by SweetSave.com. Hi Dov I am in no way an expert with this but just putting forth a thought. I did try and look at your site but its under construction so it is a little hard to comment effectively. However I did find this useful below explaining how to find and use taglines. http://www.netmechanic.com/news/vol5/promo_no15.htm Hope this helps in some way. Just like you I am new to this site also so nice to meet you Dov. Ian UK |
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Aug 28 2010, 12:09 PM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 2 Joined: 28-August 10 From: NZ Member No.: 8,848 |
QUOTE (Dovaleh @ Aug 14 2010, 01:06 PM) Hi everyone, This is my first posting! Great to see a Copywriting forum out there! I'm starting up a new business. It's a Collective buying site similar to GroupOn, but will be attracting different vendors and users. If you're not familiar with GroupOn, I guess the best suggestion would be to visit GroupOn.com. In a nutshell, the site features one deal per day of a local establishment (Restaurant, Spa, Golf club, etc) at a discounted rate. Eg. "$60 worth of food at restaurant XYZ for only $20!" My company is called SweetSave.com and I've been racking my head all day today trying to come up with a Tag line for my company which will allow me to move on to the next step of creating a logo for the name. Anyhow, some taglines that I thought of which I don't think are the strongest were: 1. Local Daily Deals 2. Now that was Sweet! 3. For the sweetest deals! 4. For the sweetest local deals! 5. Sweeter than Sweet! I'm not really feeling the above taglines and don't really feel like any of them create that IMPACT that I'm looking for. Any suggestions or help would be greatly appreciated! Thanks guys, Dov Just to cover myself as best as I can: Note: To avoid any legal issues, any person replying back with any suggestions acknowledges that the use of the suggested and / or posted tagline will be freely useable by SweetSave.com. How about "Saving Never Tasted Sweeter" -------------------- |
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