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> Sales page critique
Djembe
post Sep 5 2010, 05:21 PM
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Hi Guys,
I have been a lurker here for quite some time and would love some feedback on my first sales page.

I learn't most of what I know from 'Advertising Secrets of the written word', which was written about mail order, so suspect my sales copy is a bit long winded.

What do you think?

What about layout and visual appeal?

The main theme?

Any feedback greatly appreciated!

The page so far.

James
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