I have my own website design business based in Australia, and am wanting to send promotional postcards out the potential clients. I have the design taken care of, but when it comes to the text, I just can't think of anything that will catch the eye of an potential client. The concept is to send the postcards to local businesses which have a website which I know wouldn't work. Anyway I made a start and here is what I have come up with:

Front
What is your website saying about your business?

IMAGE is EVERYTHING...
MAKE a GOOD IMPRESSION

Back
RESEARCH has shown that IF YOU WANT TO BE TAKEN SERIOUSLY, you must have a PROFESSIONALLY-DESIGNED WEBSITE

So why risk a cheap or diy website, when you can have a website which works as hard as you do?

[My business name]'s clients have seen many positive results from their website, and they still continue to receive the positive results, which comes from a professionally-looking website.

[My business name]'s reputation is nutured through [my first name]'s dedication for quality.

[My business name]'s websites' proven success, makes [my name] the one to trust when it comes to websites.


So why not come on-board? Call [my first name] right now!

Can someone please help me with this? Maybe give me a guide in the right direction or some words to work with.

Hi bluegum,

I've just seen your entry. I think I may be able to help you out. Tell me, is this just a postcard or a leaflet? Reason I'm asking is that there is limited space on a postcard so you want to have maximum impact with minimum number of words. Let me know and I will tell you what words I think you should use.

Aanahita

Thank you for your reply Aanahita. It will be a postcard, which I need help with.

Thanks for no help.