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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 1 Joined: 27-June 10 Member No.: 8,794  |
Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum and I would like to have some honest reviews and critiques on my website that sells my anxiety/panic program.
I'm looking to focus on layout, copyrighting, and flow, etc. and even design. What is good? What is lacking? What would you recommend to make it stronger? My site is at: http://www.selfsteps.com Thank you Dayne |
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Jul 4 2010, 08:46 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 8 Joined: 4-July 10 Member No.: 8,800 |
QUOTE (Dayne @ Jun 27 2010, 05:26 PM)  Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum and I would like to have some honest reviews and critiques on my website that sells my anxiety/panic program. I'm looking to focus on layout, copyrighting, and flow, etc. and even design. What is good? What is lacking? What would you recommend to make it stronger? My site is at: selfsteps.com Thank you Dayne I have gone though your website but regrettably, I have not find it highly interesting and engaging. As the sole purpose of your website to seize the attention of your reason, you need to be a little proactive as a writer. One more thing, you have made some texts bold but you have done it so frequently that it lost all it fizz. -------------------- |
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