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Feb 20 2009, 01:59 PM
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Hello All,
I've attached a .pdf of my sales letter. The entire copy has been revised from the previous format, making it less "hypey," among other things. I appreciate any and all feedback. Best Regards, Angel
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Feb 20 2009, 04:13 PM
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Hello Angel.
Your copy is showing a lot of improvement. What I would suggest now is to set up a split run testing mechanism (A/B) and start testing the effectiveness of the copy. There are many variables to test, you can start out with a couple of different headlines and then test offers, pricing, subheads, fonts, headers, etc. Testing is by far the best way to figure out what works best for your target market. All the best! Miguel Alvarez Copywriting.com |
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