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> I was Arrested for not being able to write copy!!!, Just a little about what i am looking for and want to achieve here.

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post Jul 27 2010, 02:00 PM
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Hi Everyone I am completely new to copy writing and have much to learn.




I have had a few "experts" visit my site and pull it apart with comments like no call to action, too long, too short, not enough clarity.

So I am here to learn, I am about to go on holiday armed with copy writing pdf's mp3's books etc to try and grasp some basics of this skill My grammar is dreadful can't spell so its going to be an up hill struggle I guess a bit like hamburger hill revisited.

In my favour though I do have an wild imagination and a little weird in my thinking sometimes and I have had 2 compliments on my writing with a comment i should learn to be a copy writer correctly as i would be good at it so I am totally confused about that and generally about how the whole process works. Oh and I do like to write even if apparently rubbish at it.

I am here to learn and practice and implement what I learn.

I was arrested in my mind that this is a skill i lacked I am hoping that I can become good at this I have know idea where to start exactly.

I am hoping that someone will at least shove me into a corner and say read that or you need to do this.

Oh Yeah My name Is Ian From the UK.


Here are 3 things wrote just so you can see how badly i need to learn.


Ok sorry this is so long but i thought it would give you all an idea where i am at.

thanks for reading everything and commenting I am away for a few days so if i dont reply immediately its because i am away but thanks again for commenting anyway.

if you see a random sentence or word it just means there was an image there.

First one a story of sorts.
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I’ve Got A Brand New Combine Money Harvester



I know that’s a strange title and I do apologise; it’s a throw back from the late 70’s and early 80’s. I believe it’s a song title and wasn’t an amazing song, though very popular at the time. The actual Song Name is ‘I’ve Got a Brand New combine Harvester’.

A long time ago there was a poor land owner who had the idea that if he cleared his land of rocks and trees, etc and took a stick and made holes in the ground, and found some wheat and planted it, some months later he would have a small crop of wheat to live off.

It took him a whole year to earn a meagre amount, just enough to get by on, though he had been toiling all year, going to the river each day, drawing water with his bucket to water his crop to keep it alive, weeding, and watching over it at night to make sure he wasn’t just providing food for the local rabbits . Come good or bad weather he was out in it every single day looking after his crop. Come harvest day he was out there picking his wheat by hand, a very tiring job, year after year.

He did this until he was out one Sunday afternoon walking back from the river. He saw a man and a horse, it looked like from the distance the man was sitting down while following behind the horse through a field, the poor land owner also noticed that the field was about the same size as his own. Being Rather puzzled at this sight he determined to investigate further. As he walked across the field he remembered thinking the day before, as he walked past this field that it was ready for harvest the same as his own crop.

He hadn’t really been paying that much attention to the field itself as he walked towards the man and horse, but then it struck him that this field was almost completely harvested. He stopped in his tracks and thought how in the world could this have been done so quickly when he knew it would take him 2 weeks to harvest his own field of the same size working 12 plus hrs a day.

The poor land owner just had to find out what was going on. As he approached the man he could see that the man was sitting on some sort of chair on the top of the strangest looking contraption he had ever seen which was being pulled along by a horse, as the horse was pulling this along the contraption was cutting the wheat. The man had a job to keep up and yelled to the man to stop a moment.

The poor land owner was speechless for a moment he couldn’t believe so much had been done so easily.

The other farmer stopped and said “Hi what can I do for you Sir?” The poor land owner said “I think I need your help, I want to be able to use the same tool you have.”
For more information click here

“Well Sir” the man replied “It is very simple to use and make, if you like I will show you how.” “Would You?” The poor land owner asked, adding “yeah but I bet that kind of help is very expensive to have”. “Nope I tell you what my friend I’ll show you where you can get this information for only £0.63 (actual cost) and for that you will be given complete access for 14 days and will get 8 hrs of tuition, there will be lots of other people there too, but feel free to ask any question you have at any time over the next 14 days. After that you can buy the pieces if you want to and use it forever, but also you can show others and they will buy from you so in the end it won’t cost you a thing and you’ll make money.
To Find out more about money harvesting
14 Day trial
Click Here

“So you’re saying I can play with your contraption for 14 days?” “Yeah I sure am, my friend, and if you like it, I will help you build one for your own use, I have several fields that I have harvested already this week.”

Not only that it turns over the field , I can also use it to plant my seed, and I used it to dig ditches from the river to my field so I don’t have to go everyday to the river with my bucket to water my crops.

It’s a great invention, I have also been looking at something else called a Combined Money Harvester, basically I then get to work smarter and not harder with no more walking and certainly never have to pick my stick up and make holes to put my seed in by hand, no more weeding and I’ll never again have to walk to the river every day, it almost does everything for me once I set it up and I harvest much more and a lot faster.

Really my aim is to work smarter not harder.

I know this short story is a little odd but the Poor Landowner is like most people with a day job going to work every day to a job that just about pays the bills and is a hard slog to stay afloat with no real freedom. Each day is the same as the day before, with not much improvement on just barely getting by from week to week.

The man with the horse is someone how begins to discover the skill of how to begin to harvest money using the internet though still maybe working a day job but getting financially rewarded from his new acquired skills he is using.

The Man with The Combine Money Harvester has gone through his training and has begun to earn a full time income typically 5-6-7 figures all from working at home part time in some cases.

That’s the Power of the Combine Money Harvester.


To find out about Money
Harvesting Techniques
Click Here

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Second one was meant to be a capture page.

hmmmmmmmmmm



How I Help You To Succeed
How to generate money by using the Internet

To be absolutely truthful


It makes more sense for you to learn how to generate
an Income from the Internet first


My Friend Sarah is a doctor and has always wanted to be a doctor right from a little girl and I have always been her patient even when we used to play together.

Sarah Had to go through a learning process to become a doctor

At school Sarah wasn’t a doctor but learning skills to that end

At collage Sarah wasn’t a doctor but learning skills to that end

Even when Sarah’s tuition was paid she wasn’t a doctor

At Med school Sarah wasn’t a doctor but learning skills to that end

Just because Sarah wanted to be a doctor she could not go out and start working in a medical practice and start seeing patients and handing out medical drugs to people.

Sarah had to learn, practice, and take and pass certain exams to become qualified.

Sarah became a professional and now has 100% confidence to do what she does.


Now Sarah Is a Doctor
The Great benefit with this industry you don’t have to practice for 7 years or pass any exams to secure your financial freedom.
As you can see it pays to learn first that way you will be 100% confident too in knowing how to generate an Income from the Internet.

Trust my experience and begin to learn how to first.


Fill Out the form below to find out more

Name:
Email:
Phone Number:
Lets use an honest and practical approach.

You can take any business opportunity that you find out there and can generate an income from the internet with it.
Providing

You Know how and where to advertise to put yourself in front of enough hungry buyers that find you.


You have someone available to coach you on how to do it and continue to coach you after you have hit the payment button.


You become confident because of the results you are seeing.


You help enough other people get what they want too.

Helping others to succeed
The 3 Vital things essential to you’re success in any endeavour

You’re not just playing at this you are treating it like
a professional would.

You’re Committed to learning new skills.

You’re Committed to never quitting.

My 1 question to you is
Are you really serious about wanting to generate an
Income from the Internet?
We Are able demonstrate to you exactly how to
generate
chunks of money from £20 to £2,000

Learn Here for $1.00 you get 14 days to check us out
you will experience 4 x 2 hour live webinars
Plus get to meet the training consultants.
Fill Out the form below to find out more

Name:
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Living By Design not by Default
Warm Regards


Oh and one more


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The Go to Guy, who is he? Where can He be found? and what is he like?, He’s the guy we go to, to fix our car or to mend that leaking tap or the man that does our insurance policies, our dentist or doctor. We all have our own Go To Guys or Girls or we at least know someone that knows someone we need.



Children instinctively understand the Go to Principle when Dad Says NO! to that new dress or toy car, they know if they work it right they will get a Yes from Mum. They automatically go to mum for what they want.

Our best friends are usually our go to friend when we have a problem or even when we are happy, go to people are literally everywhere in our lives. Some not as obvious as others.

I always go to Darren to have my car fixed or serviced because he delivers what I want and need. Darren The Go To Mechanic

If I have a plumbing problem I always go to Tom. Tom The Go To Plumber

My Decorator is James I always go to James. James The Go To Decorator

My Gardener is David I always go to David. David the Go To Gardener

My Ironing Lady Is Jeanette I always go to Jeanette. Jeanette the Go To Ironing Lady

My Doctor is Sarah I always go to Sarah. Sarah the Go to Doctor

It’s very rare that you find someone that does many different jobs expertly, I certainly would not ask James to fix my car or be my Doctor, neither would I ask Tom to decorate my house.

They are specialists in their given trades and some of them have paid the price in time and money to acquire their trade skills,thus Making them my Go To Guys or Go To Girl(Doctor)

My Doctor spent 7 years acquiring her skills and paid a huge sum of money to achieve Her goal of having her own Practice.

Even in my old career we had our Go To Guy’s or Girl’s each specialising in different areas of that particular Business. We just don’t know everything about everything, we all have different skills that compliment each other.

With what I am currently doing now, My Go To Guys and Go to Girl pay a large part in my Success.

Marion, My Go To Girl is My Business Strategist whom I consult when I am planning something new or need to make some improvements, Marion instinctively knows how to make money fast, Marion knows what will work and what won’t work within this business, mainly because she has tried, erred and succeeded and passes that on so I don’t make the same mistake of wasting money and time.

Marion With her Husband James

Tranque A Very Helpful Go To Guy an expert in website design and very good at social video marketing techniques and website content creation, became a 6 figure income earner within 8 months using that marketing skill that he learnt with in that same period of time, I go to Tranque for website advice and any online Marketing skills I need to learn.

Tranque with His Wife Yumi

Chris my Go To Guy is a great teacher on how to make a lot of money from all the good Internet Search engines Google, Msn, Bing, Yahoo,and yes even Facebook etc. Chris creates professional quality teaching videos, and shows you how to do it yourself also. Without Chris I would find it very difficult to understand these money making tactics.Chris

Nick He is My Customer Service Go To Guy, Nick really Knows how to look after customers and how to get them to come back again and again bringing their money with them. If I hadn’t met Nick I would not have realised that to be successful you need integrity and a desire to see your customers not only succeed and prosper but actually care about them. Nick constantly over delivers on his promises and his marketing skill is second to none.

Nick Ames

Lastly but not least Is Gary My Go To Guy. Well He Is just plain rich I just go to him to see what an obscene amount of money looks like. Great for inspiration.

Could you Imagine what would happen if you put all these friends in the same room and told them to work together, What would happen?, What would they achieve?, what would they create?, Well They Did get together and they did achieve something They Created something amazing A real pioneering idea for this industry there is nowhere else that you can get this. It’s an industry first – iNetPro Training and iNetPro Group.

Not only did they create these 2 products but they created them for people to use and learn from there is nowhere on the internet where you can get help for such an inexpensive amount of money and use that tool to make your self money while you learn all the techniques and strategies with in this
industry.

Within the iNetPro training suite you are able to access tutorial videos, Pdf’s plus much much more 2 X 2hr LIVE webinars per week also gain access to a 24/7 chat room you get to speak with the team either in the chat rooms or live on your phone by appointment only because they are busy but none
the less available, ( they are professionals and just in just the same way you can’t just walk in to a doctors practice and say “I want to see you now” you have to book as there are many other people waiting to, imagine if you just let anyone turn up when they wanted it just wouldn’t be fair or practicle) there are many more helpful members too that constantly share there success and sometimes things they did that flopped just so you do not repeat the same mistakes.

I guess you could say that they are My Go To Group for making great money ON the Internet.

The Go To Group

So if you are looking for help and advice on how to make money Why not make iNetPro your Go To group for making money You can try iNetPro Training for $1.00 or £0.65p for a 14 day trial, Experience 4 x 2hr live webinars and get to meet the training consultants live.
Act Now click here

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Ok these where all my own ideas but they just aren't going anywhere so i desperately need help.

Thanks for reading all this please comment so i can begin to learn I am thinking of doing some sort of course somewhere to help my self.



Warm Regards Ian UK biggrin.gif
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