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> 3 Hidden Secrets to House Training Puppies, Please critique my first article!

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post Mar 9 2010, 02:10 AM
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If you’re looking for a way to house train your puppies, then you found the right article. As a puppy owner, you need to accept responsibility, learn how to properly feed your pet,
and set a play area for your pup. After reading this article, you will know the secrets to house training puppies.


Most people get a puppy and think that’s it. They never think about responsibility. You must realize that you are now a teacher. It may not look like it but you are because you will teach your pup how to behave properly. This takes patience; I mean a lot of patience.

It’s not an easy task but eventually you will find it easier every time you do it. Just remember to understand whatever your puppy does no matter how much you don’t like it. Praise it when it does something you like for it will remember it and your relationship will go a long way. One way of praising it is by feeding it with a dog biscuit.


Many pup owners have no clue on how to properly feed their pet. As an elite puppy trainer, you should know the proper way of feeding. You must create a routine for your pet to follow. Avoid doing any activity just for the sake of doing it whenever you feel like it.

Keep in mind that you are training your puppy to behave well so you yourself must behave in a disciplined way. Since your pet is young, it will poop and pee anywhere it feels like. Again, understand it and continue teaching it the proper way. Giving your pet a place it can call its own can really help training it.


Letting your puppy play around the house is a definite no-no. If you want it to have lots of fun in your house without making you angry because your bed is stuffed with mud, give it a playground or a place where it can enjoy itself.

Playing is a puppy’s natural behavior and I know that you agree that they’re really fun to look at when they play. Place a sheet of paper in any area of the pup’s place and teach it to poop there. It might not get it at first but it will learn. Never feed the pup inside its play place. Always feed it outside.


Becoming an owner of a puppy is really a big deal. You must be responsible, feed it at the right time, and allow it to have a place of its own. Now, you are one step ahead of becoming a full-fledged elite puppy trainer by knowing these secrets to house training puppies. Enjoy and live life to the fullest with your puppy.
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post Mar 9 2010, 08:55 AM
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Its ok. The facts are all there. Did not capture my attention, doesn't flow that well and could do with better punctuation. Tidy it up a bit more.
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post Mar 14 2010, 01:43 AM
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Your information is good but it's all over the place. You should create an outline first. Pick the top three, five or whatever number of secrets you have, then put them in a logical order. Even better use bullet formatting. Starting with your most important secret at the top and finishing with the least important secret at the bottom.

For example:

3 Hidden Secrets to House Training Puppies
    Intro here
      Secret #1 Patience
        secret #2
          Secret #3
            Summary
              Conclusion

              If you use a format like this, you'll cover your information fully each time and it will most likely flow everytime.

              Hope this helps.





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