Comments on: Warm & personal copy works http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/ Tips and techniques about copywriting, persuasion, marketing and more... Mon, 21 Nov 2011 19:01:29 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: muldrake http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-1318 muldrake Tue, 04 Jan 2011 21:31:03 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-1318 I always wondered about contractions and about using "you" as in "you will", instead of coming up with a phrase like "Many people will" or "Others will". It does flow much better when you write the way you talk. I always wondered about contractions and about using “you” as in “you will”, instead of coming up with a phrase like “Many people will” or “Others will”. It does flow much better when you write the way you talk.

]]> By: janel http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-1181 janel Wed, 10 Mar 2010 00:33:43 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-1181 This is a big help. Thanks. This is a big help. Thanks.

]]> By: lia http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-1155 lia Tue, 26 Jan 2010 04:49:03 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-1155 nice to find this tips, thank you :smile: nice to find this tips, thank you :smile:

]]> By: Muhammad Riski http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-1065 Muhammad Riski Fri, 22 May 2009 09:31:01 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-1065 What a big-heart copy tips. Thank you, Andrew. What a big-heart copy tips. Thank you, Andrew.

]]> By: Dhane Diesil http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-825 Dhane Diesil Fri, 30 May 2008 09:54:33 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-825 Wonderful, just wonderful! Wonderful, just wonderful!

]]> By: Ned Carey http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-792 Ned Carey Sun, 13 Apr 2008 22:06:12 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-792 I already knew about the "you" vs "I" but the other two tips are terrific. I'll start to use them right away. Thanks for a great post I already knew about the “you” vs “I” but the other two tips are terrific. I’ll start to use them right away. Thanks for a great post

]]> By: Saleem Rana http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-417 Saleem Rana Mon, 24 Sep 2007 02:46:55 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-417 I think adding a picture also helps. For example, on this page ... the friendly guy puts you at ease right away. I think adding a picture also helps. For example, on this page … the friendly guy puts you at ease right away.

]]> By: luomeilei http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-404 luomeilei Tue, 18 Sep 2007 08:02:18 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-404 The tips is very good and enlight me. The tips is very good and enlight me.

]]> By: Verb http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-228 Verb Wed, 01 Aug 2007 15:46:31 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-228 Hello. I could not agree more. One more addition, that warm and fuzzy feeling can be attained with story-telling pieces. When writing about personal incidents in our lives, that can be "re-worked" to relate to the product or service, it is possible to draw the reader into a better understanding of what you are trying to relay ( shove down their throats, in essence). The only thing I could add is to be careful not to sound um, too un-intelligent. Unfortunately that is one of my flaws. yeesh. Eileen :) Hello.

I could not agree more. One more addition, that warm and fuzzy feeling can be attained with story-telling pieces.

When writing about personal incidents in our lives, that can be “re-worked” to relate to the product or service, it is possible to draw the reader into a better understanding of what you are trying to relay ( shove down their throats, in essence).

The only thing I could add is to be careful not to sound um, too un-intelligent.

Unfortunately that is one of my flaws. yeesh.

Eileen :)

]]> By: Miguel Alvarez http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-187 Miguel Alvarez Thu, 26 Jul 2007 13:44:01 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-187 Great additions Andrew... thanks! :) Great additions Andrew… thanks! :)

]]> By: Andrew Cavanagh http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-182 Andrew Cavanagh Thu, 26 Jul 2007 01:06:35 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-182 I'd add that one of the biggest secrets to making your copy more personal is what you leave out. A high percentage of copy is filled with over-hyped overused copywriting cliches. Keeping your copy low key like you were talking to an old friend over coffee (or in a bar) will help you stay in that warm conversational tone. Also genuinely caring about helping your prospect. Kindest regards, Andrew Cavanagh I’d add that one of the biggest secrets to making your copy more personal is what you leave out.

A high percentage of copy is filled with over-hyped overused copywriting cliches.

Keeping your copy low key like you were talking to an old friend over coffee (or in a bar) will help you stay in that warm conversational tone.

Also genuinely caring about helping your prospect.

Kindest regards,
Andrew Cavanagh

]]> By: JP Moses http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/comment-page-1/#comment-171 JP Moses Sun, 22 Jul 2007 18:14:53 +0000 http://www.copywriting.com/blog/copywriting/warm-personal-copy-works/#comment-171 Great tips on personalization. I've been using these for a while now and have noticed quite a jump in responsiveness compared to before. Awesome post! Great tips on personalization. I’ve been using these for a while now and have noticed quite a jump in responsiveness compared to before.

Awesome post!

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