10 headline formulas that work like magic
20 Comments · Filed on: Blogging & RSS · Copywriting · SEO CopywritingBob Stone, one of the world’s best known copywriters said “Your first 15 words count more than the 15,000 words that follow!”
Any serious copywriter (and most successful bloggers out there) agree with the statement and actually put the advice to use every day. Why?
Because it’s the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. Those first few words that you start with (your headline) are often written in haste. Yet, they count for 50% of the success of your entire copywriting project.
Unfortunately, in today’s rush, it’s hard to spend 90% of your time coming up with a winning headline. This is especially true if you’re mass-producing content on a day-to-day basis (like bloggers and article writers).
The good news is that formulae exist that you can use to speed up your headline writing process… But before I give the formulas to you, let me say this: If you really want your copy to generate maximum response, you MUST spend a considerable amount of time writing, fine-tuning and testing your headlines.
How to use these headline formulas.
The way to use these formulas for maximum effectiveness is to take the time to write at least 5 different headline versions using each formula. This will force your creative juices to flow and give you enough headlines to split-test in your marketing campaign.
1. The direct statement headline.
Examples:
a) The best chocolate cake you ever ate. (Ladies Home Journal)
b) 5 cents a minute anytime, night and day, to anywhere in America!
2. The question headline.
Examples:
a) Who else wants to know how to drive massive traffic to their website?
b) “Do you make these mistakes in English?” (Maxwell Sackheims)
3. The how-to headline.
Examples:
a) How to promote your website for maximum response.
b) How to grow big, ripe tomatoes quickly and easily.
4. The command headline.
Examples:
a) This is your window of opportunity. Open it.
b) Enroll now and learn how to play the piano in just 90 days.
5. The implicit benefit headline.
Examples:
a) 7 sure-fire ways to sell your products on eBay.
b) Sexy legs in 5 minutes a day.
6. The guarantee headline.
Examples:
a) “Triple your website hits in one month or I’ll pay you $500 cash!”
b) The “Art Of Negotiating” Guarantees To Make You A Better Negotiator.
7. The deep discount headline.
Examples:
a) “Buy 100,000 web visitors today and receive an extra 100,000 FREE!”
b) Get 12 DVD’s for just $4 (Plus S&H).
8. The personalized headline.
Examples:
a) “George, act fast… your special offer link expires on December 23”
b) Finally, here’s how you, Bob Delano, can become an expert chef in 15 days.
9. The “reasons why” headline.
Examples:
a) Here are 7 hard-hitting reasons to visit our website this week.
b) 3 Invigorating Reasons Why Using ‘PermaSoft’ Will Make Your Life Easy!
10. The short, punchy headline.
Examples:
a) “What if…”
b) “Oh My God!”

















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Comment #:1 by Build Business Credit
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Comment #:2 by Jeff.Wang
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Comment #:5 by Constance
Thanks. Those tips are helpful.
Comment #:6 by Saleem Rana
I’m glad I found this page. Awesome tips!
Comment #:7 by Ntsike
Solid ideas to get your juices flowing! You need to practice daily to internalize the underlying fundamentals of copywriting. Copywriting is a lot like music. You can use these concepts as your musical scales, but you need to practice them daily to develop a good tone and get into a groove.
Comment #:8 by Ange Pozzo di Borgo
Hello ! Thank you very much for this great article. I’m a french copywriter, not really fluent in English (sorry ;-)), but i understand your tips. And i find it wonderful. So… thanks.
Comment #:9 by Arie Satria
I’m smiling
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with my Article’s headline. Thanks
I’m happy with this articles. Now I have new IDEAS
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Comment #:11 by IM for charity
Awesome!, Thanks now I know how to name my articles much better. Hopefully this will work and I’ll get more attention online as well for my site.
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Comment #:13 by Dhane Diesil
What a wonderful resource! I will definitely get good use out of this article.
Comment #:14 by Kris
Very Inspiring! Oddly enough, I feel like a young dog learning an old trick, and this post has really helped me to grasp the fundamentals of copy writing. Thank you for the insight.
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Comment #:16 by Marcus
The training works! It makes you think more about the words and the strategi.
Comment #:17 by Albert
Really useful tips, will derive more conversion.
Comment #:18 by Great stag do ideas
Hi Bob,
That was exactly what I’ve been looking for…simple rules even I can understand! Great list that’s added to my bookmarks.
Many thanks for sharing.
Comment #:19 by Harris Fellman
Where’s the “Who Else…” headline?
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Comment #:20 by Martha
Congratulations Miguel! Your Website is really helpful for other copywriters (like me) who are avid to learn from the best!